(this is not a piece written for a particular individual, just the expression of much that I read)
Silence sometimes seems to say the song is sung
Shooting stars a sign, that which was sought is now undone
So sing softly sweetheart, don’t let the tear slip from your eye
Love stirs no more, hears not your secret sigh
Emotions masquerading in mischievous memories
Yet we must move mysterious illusions from the mind
Remember love lives longer in laughter, echoes linger to be reborn
Spirits born of dreams are ghosts to be left behind
The envelop that was never posted with the words you never wrote
Upon the paper that still sits peacefully upon your desk
Is best left whilst memories are unspoiled by bitterness
The nib that floated in the air and ink that never made its mark
Like the scent that isn’t there yet comes wafting upon the air
A future flies high above the clouds, don’t drown in the falling rain
I hear the postman’s patter down the street, a pause, then he passes by
For the envelop was never sealed but left upon the desk
Go walk in your other world and smile at the life you cannot see
That fleeting feeling that forever flies in the face of failure
Pretends love is for life but that’s a silver screen
While my home can only be the illusion born of dreams
© David Hopcroft Revised June 2019
June 5, 2019 at 10:44 pm
I’m feeling a mixed up of emotions over this poem. Bittersweet is the strongest. But overall a lovely piece.
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June 6, 2019 at 6:34 am
The whole poem is exactly about that Jessica, that strange mixture of emotions when lovers part, knowing what is over but somewhere there is a part that says it is not over. Dreams live on as memories, but that is all they are, we still have to move on. The silver screen is a reference to self-deception. I do hope you are keeping well 🙂 ❤
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June 6, 2019 at 7:33 am
Hi David,
This is exactly what I grasp reading your lovely poem this morning. Self deception is hard to digest. We would rather pretend that we were deceived.
‘knowing what is over, somewhere there is a part saying it’s not over” ain’t this living in denial? Refusing to accept the reality.
Anita
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June 6, 2019 at 10:13 am
Exactly Anita, reality can sometimes be the hardest pill to swallow 🙂
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June 7, 2019 at 1:50 pm
Thanks again David. Yes, I’m doing well so far 🙂
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June 6, 2019 at 3:03 am
The complex nature of love is so exquisitely portrayed here. Love is so strong an emotion, yet sometimes so illusory….. wonderful that you’re touching on the reality of human feelings. I really enjoyed reading this.
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June 6, 2019 at 9:38 am
Sometimes writers focus too narrowly and only the daydream sufaces. Yes, the nature of our love is so much more complex 🙂
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June 6, 2019 at 7:37 am
Lovely poem, David. It touched my soul.
I have read your comment on my poem ‘The Last Poem” and I thank you. Sadly I am not able to log in in my anitabacha.com account. A technical problem I am not able to sort out.
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June 6, 2019 at 8:52 am
I think the emotions touch many of us, but I am afraid I am not the poet you are, you keep a simplicity that enchants and I just try my best 🙂
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June 6, 2019 at 8:55 am
We are both
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June 6, 2019 at 11:16 am
Beautiful and touching. Feeling this one.
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June 6, 2019 at 8:40 pm
I must try and read some of your work, though I see it seems to be password protected 🙂
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June 6, 2019 at 9:09 pm
I just have the chapter ones that are not protected at this time. After yesterday I felt I needed a break from judgment.
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June 6, 2019 at 6:29 pm
❤ just pierced my heart, in aood way!👌
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June 6, 2019 at 8:10 pm
I’m glad it was in a good way 🙂 I would not like to have brought hurt to you ❤
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June 7, 2019 at 2:34 pm
Never David!☺️❤️
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June 7, 2019 at 5:56 pm
❤ ❤ 🙂
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April 10, 2024 at 11:28 am
Just wow!!!
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April 10, 2024 at 1:51 pm
Thank you so much Mia. I really appreciate your reading this and commenting.
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