Away from love and crazy poems this is a more serious piece relating to health
It is safe here for you under your shell
That you have carefully constructed for yourself
Was it to keep yourself in
Perhaps to keep others out
Maybe a little or all of both
What if the walls you have made
Were of concrete so solid and firm
What if they were lined with steel
What if there were no windows
What if there were no doors
What if you never got out
What if you lived and died there
What if you did not
What if it were not like this
How would you feel
If those walls were paper thin
If the roof blew off with the wind
If the doors could never be shut
If the windows were always open
What then
How would you feel
Would you try to crawl into yourself
Would you try to burrow under the floor
How would you feel
Naked and exposed
Bared mind but not body
A threat of revealing yourself
What if there were love
What if that love could be found
Would you still hide
In yourself underground
What if you took a step out
What if you went for a walk on your own
What if the path you took
Appeared to have no end
What if the sky overhead
Always seemed to be black
What then
What if you had a sense
That you were not quite alone
What if you turned and saw
An outstretched hand
What if you refused
What if you ran away
What if the sun were to shine
What if the skies had all turned blue
What if you were to walk again
What if the path had an end
What if the end were in you
What if you turned and saw
The outstretched hand was still there
What if it were not
What if you found a friend
What if they really cared
What if you really felt
There was a life to be shared
What if you still turned to run away
What if you found those bricks
Would you rebuild that steel wall
Would you find the door you could lock
Would you close the shutters forever
What if you did not
Copyright: David Hopcroft June 2019
June 25, 2019 at 5:41 pm
A touching piece
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June 25, 2019 at 6:59 pm
One of the hardest to write, lack of communication when a young person creates a shell. At least now this has recognition as a condition in the health services.
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June 25, 2019 at 8:16 pm
Great poem! Thank you for sharing it!
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June 25, 2019 at 8:41 pm
Thank you. I am glad you liked it 🙂
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June 26, 2019 at 7:37 am
Reblogged this on Travel N Write.
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June 26, 2019 at 7:40 am
Beautiful complexion of what if’s, maybe and realities!! ❤ Excellent write David!!
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June 26, 2019 at 8:01 am
The difficulty that some young people have in communication is something we need to understand. When we talk of love we can have a very limited view of the outstretched hand, but holding out that hand to show a different kind of love becomes increasingly important in a world that threatens to treat us all as mere statistics, we have to make the effort to understand people and show the love, care and compassion that they need 🙂
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June 26, 2019 at 8:19 am
MAGIC WORDS, LOVE THE SITE, CHINA
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June 26, 2019 at 8:20 am
Reblogged this on LIVING THE DREAM.
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June 27, 2019 at 3:20 am
You got that “what if” nicely written David. This is a mind training. Forces ones mind to think and analyze “yes, what if”. But in life we can only do our best.
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June 27, 2019 at 3:04 pm
This approach to poetry comes from a Cypriot poet I was introduced to 🙂
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